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Deviation Spotlight
- Apr 13
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Devious Journal Entry
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So, I saw in my friend's (http://pandarainbow.deviantart.com/) journal entry that she is taking this 100 theme challenge. I've decided it looked fascinating, so I will be doing it as well; if anything, to help me diversify and practice my writing.
1. Life
2. Youth
3. Content
4. Change
5. Dreams
6. Pessimistic
7. Pirate
8. Novel
9. Doom
10. Garden
11. Sadness
12. Confusion
13. Freedom
14. Inevitable
15. Idle
16. Vampires
17. Convention
18. Roleplaying
19. Skull
20. Pain
21. Joy
22. Time
23. Warmth
24. Voodoo
25. Insomnia
26. Solitude
27. Zombies
28. Heaven
29. Evil
30. Weary
31. Candyland
32. Robot
33. Old-scho
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Hey man, I don't know if this is the best way to get a message out to you, but I wanted to tell you that your writing is really impeccable. I mean it's incredibly good; professional quality. I've read through all your BCB stuff and was blown away by Friends Forever. It's so heartfelt and attentive to characterization that it stands on its own as a wonderful story, regardless of the fandom. Hell, I think you did more in the months it took to write it than Taeshi has done through all her years of comic making. It's honestly that good.
Then I find all your writing here, and it's equally as earnest and meaningful. You seem to intimately understand the inner workings of the self in all its facets, whether its being lead by the heart, mind, soul, environment, or some often indescribable mix of all possible factors. Your ability to render tragedy in the neurotic mind is really unbelievable and shockingly real, and I don't mean that to be indicative of your character. Your writing expresses the precocious changes of emotion and feeling so well that I had to tell you how much it has captivated me.
Please please please PLEASE keep writing. How anyone hasn't taken the time here to tell you how real and wonderful your writing is I simply cannot understand. The things you've written translate existential pain and unintelligibility so well, all while being grounded in tangible characterization. I simply cannot harp on enough about your work without taking a huge nosedive into platitudes. All I know is I want to continue reading things written from your unique perspective, no matter what world it takes place in.
Then I find all your writing here, and it's equally as earnest and meaningful. You seem to intimately understand the inner workings of the self in all its facets, whether its being lead by the heart, mind, soul, environment, or some often indescribable mix of all possible factors. Your ability to render tragedy in the neurotic mind is really unbelievable and shockingly real, and I don't mean that to be indicative of your character. Your writing expresses the precocious changes of emotion and feeling so well that I had to tell you how much it has captivated me.
Please please please PLEASE keep writing. How anyone hasn't taken the time here to tell you how real and wonderful your writing is I simply cannot understand. The things you've written translate existential pain and unintelligibility so well, all while being grounded in tangible characterization. I simply cannot harp on enough about your work without taking a huge nosedive into platitudes. All I know is I want to continue reading things written from your unique perspective, no matter what world it takes place in.
Welcome to 
If you have any questions, don't be afraid to ask myself or refer to the group page.
One thing I like to say to new members (in case they didn't read the new member info on our page) is that all submissions sent to us throughout the week will be sent out on Mondays and Thursdays -so if you submit some work and it isn't sent out right away, no worries it will be. Other than than that enjoy being in the group and happy reading and writing.
-elohcin111 (Founder of Writers4Life)
If you have any questions, don't be afraid to ask myself or refer to the group page.One thing I like to say to new members (in case they didn't read the new member info on our page) is that all submissions sent to us throughout the week will be sent out on Mondays and Thursdays -so if you submit some work and it isn't sent out right away, no worries it will be. Other than than that enjoy being in the group and happy reading and writing.
-elohcin111 (Founder of Writers4Life)
Hey~~
Just wanted to thank you for the fave!
Also, since I'm currently focusing on music, I was wondering if you'd be interested in listening/sharing my music?
If you are, I can link you to where you can find that stuff!
-Dylan Seto
Just wanted to thank you for the fave!
Also, since I'm currently focusing on music, I was wondering if you'd be interested in listening/sharing my music?
If you are, I can link you to where you can find that stuff!
-Dylan Seto
I listened to some of the music on your soundcloud. It sounds like you have a lot of potential in creating artistic music. I will admit you put this thought into my head while I was scrolling through your latest journal post, but you have a style very similar to 808's and Heartbreak, with more of an indie vibe versus traditional hip-hop. You do seem to have an active grasp of the somber elements that make 808's what it is, however.
In an attempt to provide critique, I will say some of your tracks are too consistent. Or rather, they lack punchy-ness, for the lack of better words. In other words (hopefully better ones this time lol), you have good motifs and riffs, but tie them together in ways that aren't interesting at a professional level, nor do you have the same variety that is seen in high level artistic expression, as in using a multitude of these motifs and riffs in each track.
Though, take that with a grain of salt, as I am just providing input as a listener, versus a creator.
In an attempt to provide critique, I will say some of your tracks are too consistent. Or rather, they lack punchy-ness, for the lack of better words. In other words (hopefully better ones this time lol), you have good motifs and riffs, but tie them together in ways that aren't interesting at a professional level, nor do you have the same variety that is seen in high level artistic expression, as in using a multitude of these motifs and riffs in each track.
Though, take that with a grain of salt, as I am just providing input as a listener, versus a creator.
Thanks for the critique!
I more or less agree -- it's something that I've noticed as well. I feel like a lot of the stuff I have up right now are kind of mechanical in nature, and it's something I'm trying to go against in the stuff I have stuffed away.
I more or less agree -- it's something that I've noticed as well. I feel like a lot of the stuff I have up right now are kind of mechanical in nature, and it's something I'm trying to go against in the stuff I have stuffed away.
Thanks for the 
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~ Shade
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